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Hey Rosey! Here reviewing for Task 2 of the Instructor Competition! This is a good piece, and I think it has the potential to be pretty great (I bet people ...

Okay! Sorry about the long reply, but here I am. To all, thank you for all your critiques and spell checks, I cannot believe that I did so many things ...

Thanks defend! I've written poems on and off before, but I'm not so good myself. Hopefully I can get some practice here though. Oh, and for future readers, I'm sorry ...

Thanks defend! I've written poems on and off before, but I'm not so good myself. Hopefully I can get some practice here though. Oh, and for future readers, I'm sorry ...

Hey mizz. I have a poetry post, and it!d be wonderful if you could review it. But there's no rush... it was a bit of a spoof post - just ...

Hey everyone. This is my first poem - posted on here - and really, I'm not that much of a poem writer. But I love poems, love reading them, and ...

Wow. I almost forgot that this was a writing site for a second! I mean, all the language, and name-calling.. People are just trying to help, Rawr. Just to let ...

...I-I think I peed myself. *looks down* No, I'm serious. I really think I did. And alike others, I'm a Twilight fan. Of course, it's not the best book I've ...

Thank you Rosey and Selene for commenting - every little bit helps! And I see how there are a lot of confusing and rough patches. I appreciate you both pointing ...

I liked the feel of this piece - it was interesting. And the fact that it was choppy.. it worked. I almost thought it was a poem when you started ...

Absolutely beautiful. The rhythmn was amazing! I love this poem! -R

This is wonderful! Thank you so much!! I haven't heard of any of these, and this all is a huge help. :D

I found out about YWS at a writing camp that I attended this past week. The two professors that were in charge of the camp had high respects for YWS, ...

Wow. Absolutely wonderful. Breath-taking, if I can say that without being too terribly cliche. But seriously, that's a great piece of work. And I don't think I saw one type ...

I am my father’s child. I am in his image. I, myself, mirror his exact composure. I trust only him – I always had. He would forever hear my rants ...